Saturday, December 4, 2010

untitled #18

i learned some
thing to

night just

now actu
al
ly

jackdaniels is not
a very good

by itself
dri

nk

theres a reason
for

the add
ition of

coke

though from
per

sonal experience
are-sea is

the best
mix

ing cola

3 comments:

ds said...

I dunno. I think it stands well alone. but I'm also an alcoholic and have been known to drink gin straight for breakfast. nice writing also. like what you've been doing of late.

loofrin said...

i'm kind of getting back to my 'roots' some of my older stuff was 'influenced' by ee cummings. i'm playing around with form a little bit. no telling what will end up happening. thanks for the compliments. put down the bottle

ds said...

I have somewhere a collected book of cummings. he was an early favorite of mine. he's a good writer of content as well as form (for which he usually gets more credit). unfortunately, his style is so distinct that most writing derivative of his is instantly exposed. would like to find a copy of the enormous room (or something like that).
for the last several months, I've been trapped in Berryman's Dream Songs. they're probably destroying me.
the bottle isn't so destructive.