Sunday, April 13, 2008

Jessica

She had several small holes in her panties.
Her skirt,
so punk and school girl
four years earlier, was
frayed at the edges.
All quietly betraying
a wife used hard, a young mother
who has chosen poorly
more than once;
so much like her mom.

6 comments:

ds said...

sorry, man, it had to be done. I have a pattern.

Extra Gravy said...

It had to be done?

Alijah Fitt said...

run tm run! So, you've met my neighbor?

thirdworstpoetinthegalaxy said...

TM - ds sometimes gets in character by responding to poems. He's done it with mine before as well... more of a thread/dialogue than anything. I won't speak for him, but I'm pretty sure his "Jessica" was *not* a personal attack. Just an in character response.

ds said...

yeah, thirdworst, that's the ticket. exactly. sorry, dude. didn't mean to offend at all.

Extra Gravy said...

no prob -I'm still getting to know everyone. I like how active the group is.